AO5 - Growth in sport

3 Artical on growth in sports.

Produce three newspaper articles detailing the expansion and growth of these sports. Growth in the sport must be explained in the following terms.



Major(Rugby) http://www.mediafire.com/?ddgds5n598m1vgs

Developing(Vollyball) http://www.mediafire.com/?h550b9twteq97pd


Minor(Badminton) http://www.mediafire.com/?c3gl46eg6ajekk9

4 comments:

  1. LStJohn13 March 2012 at 03:09

    - Use of key points down the left hand side is good, makes clear what you're position is on growth in sport

    - Try and tidy up the language in the paragraphs e.g.

    "33,098 is the number that the RFU has seen a raise to in rugby participation" ....Vs.... "The RFU has seen the number of adults participating in rugby union rise by over 33,000"

    - Second paragraph on spectatorship also needs tidying up a bit however content generally good; clear use of statistics to show growth and then reasons [national success/role model] offered

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  2. Jamie Gillum13 March 2012 at 07:58

    - What have the numbers risen from and to? 16% to what figure?
    -33,000 risen from what?
    -Same for second paragraph

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  3. thooper6 June 2012 at 09:31

    Jack

    Whilst attempting to look at your final draft the links wouldnt work or scribed was down. But to gain a distinction you must have:
    Covered your 4 major areas of growth and given reasons for this growth including
    • youth culture
    • national success
    • role models
    • influence of national curriculum

    You must also be using a range of statistical from multiple sources

    Regards
    TH

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  4. thooper24 June 2012 at 07:48

    Jack

    Unfortunately mediafire does not seem to be letting me access your work. I am unsure whether its the link or my computer. mayeb worth testing it yourself but I will try again tomorrow at school

    Regards
    TH

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